Promiscuous night, stripped from its old rags, dances with its cold nudity next to the faithful rain the improvised jazz of my grey worries. Spirits can’t sleep between old whisky glasses, sweetening it with the salt of wandering memories in the penetrating darkness.
Black idle crows, sail through the shadows sculpting like masterful artists from the Renaissance tombstones of shivering marble, sheets that wrap the body, bristling the sighs of the being; which doesn’t want to surrender to the fratricidal storm that unpunished inflicts it perfect stabs with excessive passion, breaking the soul.
And the owl that overnights on the window disturbing the sleep, is a faithful witness of the hoot of a heart that bleeds every evening waiting for the night chaos. Stealthy wind wafts through the cracks of the soul, leaving its fertile field dry and barren of hopes, covering the yells that cynically consume the psyche.
Chapeau…
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Grazie mille!!!!! ☺
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Te sugiero que visites scripto.es y veas si te apetece participar de ese proyecto. Saludos
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De que trata el proyecto? Saludos!
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Hola! Scripto es un sitio de reunión de escritores en el que leer los posts de los participantes, más o menos divididos en diversas categorías que incluyen poesía. Por eso pensé que te interesaría verlo. saludos.
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Suena genial, le echaré un vistazo. Muchas gracias!!
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The poem conveys great suffering. I hope you do not speak of your life … it’s just a poem! Namasté.🙏
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Not really. This post is just a way to show one part of myself. So, dont worry. It’s just a poem. Namasté
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Foto y poema. Dos composiciones que dominas a la perfección.
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Ooohh!!!! muchisimas gracias me ilusiona muchisimo que pienses así!!! 😊😊😊😊😊
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Oh wow…so beautiful!
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Thank you!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Wow, you are indeed a gifted writer. I can capture a lot of emotion from this writing. Also, thanks for stopping by to visit my blog. 😀
Many Blessings!
Sherline.
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It has been a pleasure. Thank you very much for your words, they make me real illusion.
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I am in love with this picture of the night!
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Thanks for your words.
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You’re gladly welcome!
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Excellent 👌
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Thank you!!! 😊😊😊
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Wow 😳!! That was really some good poetry.. reflecting that moon
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I am very excited to think so.
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An awesome picture with an apt poem too good
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Thank you!!!
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I am inclined to agree with ‘boundlessblessingsblog’. A poignant poem about the restless mind – the imagery is so eloquently expressed here.
Thanks too Luis for the many ‘likes’ on my blog. I can’t tell you how humbled I am that you took the time to read so many posts – gracias! :)*
* hope that’s the correct spelling! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your words, I’m glad you like it. It has been a real pleasure to read to you. Yes, it’s written in the right way
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I had forgotten all about this Luis. Where have you been??! 🙂 You are most welcome – gracias!:)
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This is brilliant.
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Thank you for appreciating it😊
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Your compositions are wonderfully written! And thank you for visiting my blog and liking so many of the posts❣️
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Thanks a lot, I’m glad you like it. It has been a pleasure…
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This was beautiful piece!!
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Thank you for appreciating it. 😊
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Belle écriture ! on se laisse embarquer dans votre univers ….
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Merci beaucoup, je suis heureux que vous l’aimez.😊😊😊😊😊
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Bravo! Stunnning!
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Thank you!!! 😊😊😊
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Fantastic
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Muito obrigado!!! 😊
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You are gifted…thank you for sharing with us 🙂
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Thank you for appreciating it😊
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Maravilhoso!
Perdoe o italiano na outra postagem! My mistake. ❤️
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Está perdoada . muito obrigado
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Woow
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😊😊
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It is overwhelming when you can feel someone through your words! Exquisite !
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What nicer words you have towards me, it makes me happy that you liked it, thank you very much.
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Me encanta.
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😊😊
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